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Por favor actualisa pronto,me encanta tu historia y mas por que la las parejas me gustan mucho como estan y mas la de sevi y sirius me encantan pero no encuentro casi historias de ellos,no tan buenas como esta por lo menos

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Por favor actualiza!

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Fecha: 05/09/17 - 08:13 am Título: Capitulo 15

Hola buenas noches Me fascinó Me encantó Está divina la historia y muy interesante Me fascina la pareja de serverus y sirius una relación desde pequeños Espero que Sirius se va a comportar y lo trate con cariño todas las parejas son muy chéveres me gusta ver la reacción de Harry y Draco celando a serverus Muchas gracias Porfa porfa no demores en actualizar

Remitente: angelsky777 Firmado starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 03/09/17 - 12:36 am Título: Capitulo 15

que buen cap.

Remitente: Souldhunter Firmado starstarstarstarstar [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 02/09/17 - 11:42 am Título: Capitulo 15

Ohhhhh! Un Sirius bebé 😍

No me lo esperaba pero es genial.

Adoro este Drarry (aunque por el comportamiento es más Harco ya que Harry es un padre consentidor y Draco una esposa con muuuucho carácter)

Sigo enamorada de la historia.

Remitente: Souldhunter Firmado starstarstarstarstar [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 02/09/17 - 11:42 am Título: Capitulo 15

Ohhhhh! Un Sirius bebé 😍

No me lo esperaba pero es genial.

Adoro este Drarry (aunque por el comportamiento es más Harco ya que Harry es un padre consentidor y Draco una esposa con muuuucho carácter)

Sigo enamorada de la historia.

Remitente: anabetz Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 02/09/17 - 06:59 am Título: Capitulo 15

Me encanta la pareja de sirius y severus pero como no hai muchos fic de ellos no tengo muchas oportunidades de leer de eyos, graciar por esta linda historia ya quiero leer mas de la interaccion de mi sevi con sirius gracias

Remitente: acuario21 Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 01/09/17 - 05:00 pm Título: Capitulo 15

Buenos eso no lo esperaba, pero siempre me ha gustado la pareja que forman Sirius y Severus, y si tienen la oportunidad de criarse juntos es fabuloso, besitos y gracias por actualiza.

Remitente: hikari1992 Firmado starstarstarstarstar [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 02/06/17 - 12:49 am Título: Capitulo 14

Me ha encantado, enamorado y divertido este fic espero la continuacion porque me he quedado con muchas ganas de saber que pasara ahora con Harry, Draco, Sev y cia. Bueno te mando muchos saludos y abrazos,

Respuesta del autor: muchas gracias, y que bueno que te guste, no soy mas que una novata en este pero hago mi mejor esfuerzo. gracias!

Remitente: TALY Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 31/05/17 - 05:36 pm Título: Capitulo 14

hoooo se pone demasiado interesante la historia, me encanta, ya quiero saber qué efectos traerá el actuar de Harry como heredero

gracias por continuar la historia

Respuesta del autor: gracias!

Remitente: liss83 Firmado starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 31/05/17 - 03:56 pm Título: Capitulo 14

Uý se armo la grande. Pero estoy feliz por ethan, arthur y sus hijos

Respuesta del autor: si eso es muy bueno

Remitente: angelsky777 Firmado starstarstarstar [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 30/05/17 - 05:22 am Título: Capitulo 14

Hola que buen cap hacía tiempo no se actualizaba la historia haber que sucede.

Respuesta del autor: si, lamento la demora

Remitente: alexamayurausagi Firmado starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 30/05/17 - 04:13 am Título: Capitulo 14

T demoraste, aunq geacias por actualizar no desaparesca tanto xfis :)

Respuesta del autor: lo lamento, intentare no hacerlo

Remitente: RICHANN2002 Firmado starstarstarstarstar [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 30/05/17 - 03:33 am Título: Capitulo 14

Por queeee lo dejas en la duda me voy a morir si no se qué pasa 😭😭😭 amo tu historia espero lo demás Con ansias n.n

Respuesta del autor: lo siento T-T. gracias por comentar

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Fecha: 30/05/17 - 03:06 am Título: Capitulo 14

aww quiero leer mas, ya quiero k harry y draco tengan sex....cof cof digo que se casen

Respuesta del autor: jajaaj aun no se estan centrando en sev, pero quizas en algun capitulo venidero Sevy vaya a jugar con Sirius y....rnbueno eso te lo dejo a tu imaginacion y a la de mi musa jajajaja

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Fecha: 30/05/17 - 02:30 am Título: Capitulo 14

OMG!!!!!! Lo amo lo ame me encanto espero lo que sigue con ansias tu muy bien Harry así se hace cuanto aguantará el moreno sin arrancarle la ropa a su lindo y tierno dragón espero con ansias la actualizacion

Respuesta del autor: uy yo tambien me pregunto cuanto aguantara la autora sin poner esa parte jejej

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Fecha: 14/05/17 - 05:03 pm Título: Capitulo 13

Genial me puse al día apenas,uff mi hermoso dragón defendiendo lo suyo, qué lindo es secreto.*.*

Respuesta del autor: jejej si fue tan lindo

Remitente: fansDyaois Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 02/05/17 - 05:58 am Título: Capitulo 13

Por que ya no has actualizado???

Respuesta del autor: oh lo siento es que mi musa se fue de paseo la muy condenada

Remitente: RICHANN2002 Firmado starstarstarstarstar [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 14/04/17 - 01:51 am Título: Capitulo 13

Mooooommmm ojalá y estés bien espero aún tu actualizaciónes n.n

Respuesta del autor: lamento la demora pero hubo algunos percances

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Fecha: 08/03/17 - 08:40 pm Título: Capitulo 13

Muy buen capitulo

Respuesta del autor: gracias

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Fecha: 08/03/17 - 08:34 pm Título: Capitulo 12

Pobre Arthur

Respuesta del autor: si pobechito

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Fecha: 08/03/17 - 08:16 pm Título: Capitulo 8

el amor...

Respuesta del autor: jejej

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Fecha: 08/03/17 - 07:52 pm Título: Capitulo 7

Rumus y Lucius se ve venir

Respuesta del autor: es q son tan lindosss

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Fecha: 08/03/17 - 07:48 pm Título: Capitulo 6

Serpiente maternal, me gusra

Respuesta del autor: a q si

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