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Remitente: tamashiyuki Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 17/10/13 - 05:27 pm Título: Cap5 Tiempo

Creo que no es tu imaginacion, realmente se estan haciendo mas cortos... U.u
Me gusto mucho leer el fic!!! Aunque me gustaria la conti u.u

Remitente: Lillith Malfoy Firmado starstarstarstarstar [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 15/07/12 - 11:20 pm Título: Cap5 Tiempo

Sigue con la fic... por fi... está buena y se merece caps super largos... neh... kkkk... bss

Remitente: Aryam_Tsepesh Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 12/06/12 - 12:58 am Título: Cap5 Tiempo

Woooow !!! eso es lo que esperaba escuchar, hace daño ver star trek, la linea temporal de ellos se rompe pero ellos ya existen en otra, sin la nesesidad de nacer en ella, por lo que seguirán existiendo en esa nueva linea, woow que complicado es de admirar que escribas este tipo de fic.

y reitero por favor terminalo que me tienes siguiéndolo plisss.

Respuesta del autor: xD sii!!, muchas gracias, por este y los otros comentarios! rnYa empece el sig capitulo (creo >_> a menos que fuera de otro fic...lo dudo pero...ok dejo de divagar y te contesto)rnSi, me gusta complicar las cosas y fundir cerebros, rn(sabes acabo de buscarlo y si ya tengo el final del sig cap, y te adelanto que termina muy mal xD)rnTerminar la historia es lo que intento, puedo ver el final, pero no estoy segura de que me guste...intentare actualizar pronto!

Remitente: Aryam_Tsepesh Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 12/06/12 - 12:38 am Título: Capítulo 4

noooooooooo!!! no lo dejes sin fin, esta muy bueno es una forma interesante como trabajas la historia por fa terminalo T-T

Remitente: Aryam_Tsepesh Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 12/06/12 - 12:21 am Título: Capítulo 3

jajaja secuestro ñacañacañaca a ese dragon W^.^W

Remitente: Aryam_Tsepesh Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 12/06/12 - 12:03 am Título: Capítulo 2

sigo aquí jijiji siguiente cap. W^¬^W

Remitente: Aryam_Tsepesh Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 11/06/12 - 11:41 pm Título: Cap.1 -Todo o Nada

jajajaja buen comentario... sobre el cap muy interesante y mas con lo que me chifla el TH huyyy !!! seguiré ne los caps que tienes publicados, esperando que mi animo te de ganas de seguirlo.

att. Ary

pd: TU MUY BIEN!!!

Remitente: sandracrod Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 15/04/12 - 05:57 am Título: Capítulo 4

me gusto tu historia

Remitente: Lillith Malfoy Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 14/04/12 - 01:15 am Título: Capítulo 4

También espero que termines la historia, es buena y todavía nos puede dar grandes emociones... bss y gracias

Remitente: Dark Dafne Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 15/04/11 - 03:27 am Título: Cap.1 -Todo o Nada

No lo seguirás ????

Respuesta del autor: Si, pero...rn.-. ahora mismo estoy metida en otra cosa...rnIntentare actualizar antes de junio...ya se no tengo vergüenza...

Remitente: ShirayGaunt Firmado starstarstarstarstar [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 11/04/11 - 03:33 am Título: Capítulo 3

Please!!!! Pon conti pronto!!!


Respuesta del autor: No es mucho, pero conti hecha xD

Remitente: Hagobi Riench Firmado [Reporta esto]
Fecha: 08/01/11 - 12:09 am Título: Capítulo 2

Es todo un reto buscar cosas de la época de Tom... no hay mucho ;A; *nanai*

Y bueno, las reacciones me gustaron, algunas las consideré un poco brusca, tratándose de Riddle, pero supongo que en ese tiempo la gente era...reacia a tratar a todo el mundo.

En fin, escribiría algo más largo...pero sinceramente no sé mucho en qué enfocarme xD. Aún así, el capítulo me agradó bastante.

¡Suerte C:!

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Fecha: 05/01/11 - 09:38 pm Título: Capítulo 2

Cuando vuelves a publicas? :P

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Fecha: 05/01/11 - 08:33 pm Título: Capítulo 2

reina, si drake no esta con harry emparejalo con nev, que son lindos juntos tambien

no tardes en aactualizar!!

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Fecha: 03/01/11 - 12:28 am Título: Cap.1 -Todo o Nada

Me gusta como va, la verdad. Completamente inusual ver a esos tres trabajando en pro de detener a Voldemort, pero debo decir que me agradó ver que Draco, Neville y Harry se las apañan bastante bien juntos, quién sabe, en otra realidad seguro serán un buen equipo.

También, la forma de situar a todos los otros personajes y no olvidar que existen los amigos de Harry ;0;. Creo que...que trataras a todos, hizo que me gustara más esto.

No he leído demasiados fics con viajes en el tiempo, pero éste me agrada el rumbo que está tomando. Espero que lo sigas en algún momento, por lo menos yo, te estaré mirando para ver si sigues C:, todo se ve interesante por ahora.

(Por cierto, me gusta imaginar que en este fic, el Voldemort que usas es malo, como lo merece

Respuesta del autor: yey!!Gracias x3rnSe que es inusual,rnEl universo de HP tiene bastantes personajes hay que aprovechar eso!!=3rnTengo varios caps, pero soy lenta!!xD tmb soy muy distraida, pero realmete quiero terminar esto!rnrnEn cuanto Voldemort malo...pues, Voldemort, Voldemort, supongo :B, pero Tom aun es un niño.

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Fecha: 20/12/10 - 12:13 am Título: Cap.1 -Todo o Nada

wuooooooooooo me encantó!!!!! ahora que pasará?? sigue la historia pleaseeeeeeeeee

que esos tres viajen atrás en el tiempo es novedoso, es extraño el nuevo trío de oro que se formó a causa de la guerra, ^^ un beso  


Respuesta del autor: Yey!!Gracias, que bueno que te guste!!rnPor supuesto que la continuare - o por lo menos voy a intentarlo ><-rnrnxD seee, son algo inusual, Neville, Harry y Draco, aunque no creo que sea tan dorado porque Draco al fin y al cabo sigue siendo una serpiente x3 rn

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Respuesta del autor: xD hehe

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Fecha: 19/12/10 - 03:29 pm Título: Cap.1 -Todo o Nada

jejje sigue esta bueno

Respuesta del autor: hehe, lo intentare!!

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Fecha: 19/12/10 - 11:11 am Título: Cap.1 -Todo o Nada

amm, bueno, a mi los fics de viajes en el tiempo me gustan mucho! y este trío puede armarla buena en el pasado, jujuju

asi que 62 años, eh? a mi las mates no se me dan muy bien, pero eso debe ser más o menos un Tom aun estudiante...

tiene buena pinta, estaré esperando lo que sigue!!

Respuesta del autor: Hehe...rnTengo una pequeña obsecion con lo viajes en el tiempo, y pero siempre leo sobre lo mismo, por eso intento hacerlo diferente, xD y tienes razon van a causar unos cuantos destrozos!!rnrn62 años, ahora no estoy segura, es algo que escribi hace tiempo- hace bastante- pero me parece que en el sig cap sale el año al que llegan xDrnSi hay un error es que mis mates no son lo que eran antes!!xD

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