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Fecha: 13/11/16 - 12:06 pm Título: Episodio I

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Fecha: 29/10/16 - 02:29 pm Título: Episodio I

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Fecha: 01/06/13 - 06:19 am Título: Episodio II

HIHI:3 como estas? espero que bien , lo siento no comentar antes pero eh estado muy ocupada con el colegio, ya este es mi ultimo año alli y pues hay que esforzarse... en cuando a lo que te dije, traquila son cositas, pequeños detalles que pude observar, ya que soy algo detallista, como en el 2 capitulo me hubiese gustado una descripción de ciertas cosas, no pasar como tan mm asi en las partes de una misma escena, pero de resto todo bien, escribes muy bien, espero leerte pronto nos vemos bye bye xD

Respuesta del autor: Gracias por tus comentarios y tus observaciones. Haré los arreglos pertinentes y mejoraré el estilo de escritura así como de narración ;)

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Fecha: 17/04/13 - 04:19 am Título: Episodio II

me pareció muy bueno, ojala y lo sigas, ya quiero saber que pasa *^* claro que veo un poco de inconsistencia en tu relato, como que a veces se pierde un poco y lo deja como cortado, pero es super bye bye :D

Respuesta del autor: Me alegra que te haya gustado, eso despierta un mejor ánimo en mi. Es que mi pc se dañó y la memoria usb donde guardaba las copias de seguridad, por desgracia no pude salvar los datos guardando en la web y me he quedado estancada por el desánimo. Pero dime, cuáles fueron los errores' me ayudaría en gran manera si me lo dices. Y gracias por comentar

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